Monday, March 9, 2009

tugas sir lagi... haha..

SMAK Penabur Gading Serpong
Kelapa Gading Barat Raya
Tangerang, Indonesia
15325

March 10th, 2009

School of Medicine
John Hopkins University
720 Rutland Avenue
Baltimore, MD 21205 – 2196
USA

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a student of Brilliant Class attendance of 2007-2010. I am writing to you on purpose to inquire about SAT and TOEFL requirements.

I am interested to continue my education in The Biology Department at John Hopkins University. I would like to know whether your department need SAT1/ SAT2 or TOEFL as the requirements or not. Then, if the department need it, what is the standard score I have to attain? Therefore, if I would like to apply for scholarship, what additional test should I complete?

Finally I would like to express my gratitude to you and you could contact by email in bhellazz_bussy@yahoo.com.

Faithfully yours,



Christabella A. Kurniawan

2 comments:

Teguh Santoso said...

What a better revised letter in your March 9 posting. However, correct these:

1. I am interested IN CONTINUING ...
2. department needS (check, please, for 2 errors/ occurences)

Thanks, Bella. Don't forget to email them, and c.c. it to sir.

Surya Sutanto said...

Wow.. I am totally amazed.. Sorry, I've just read your letter for John Hopkins. It's just so incredible, I can say =) John Hopkins is one of the best uni that offers Med degree in States.

SMAK GS must be really good~ huhu

Wish you all the best for your university applications, scholarship, study offer, everything!

And also: Happy Easter!! May the Lord's love, peace, and hope be with you,